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The Oldies, The Quoldies

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I wanted to try my hand at drawing old cartoon style. Found out that I freaking love it. It is so simple and adorable! I already loved old cartoon style but OMG <3 

Here have a modern song turned vintage! www.youtube.com/watch?v=5meWI3…
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I usually prefer comments over critiques, since then I don't have to be serious. But since you asked for it, I shall go ahead.

So far as I can see, the "old cartoon" style was not really employed fully as the style is not drastically different from your other works. The greyscale does add to the style, as well as the eyes and the the ears. The simplistic background is also effective for the style, but not uniquely "old school".

Beyond that, the posing looks a bit awkward; almost as if she would be falling over in that position. Recommendations would include adjusting the style to be more unique to the old school design, as well as minor changes to the posing.

Being critical is always awkward. Easier to say, "I like this".